ViperPiper's Bagpipe Tunes

I am posting 2 versions, one simple (for bands) and one more complex (for soloists). i really want feed back on this so could people that download it please give me feedback. Tell me which one u think is better.
Tell me if the complex one is too over the top. etc
Thanks,

Nice tune........but......the timing is off in the first part......you are LIGHT one 1/8th note......that is why it sounds rushed.......nice underlying rhythm though.......once you fix it the way you want it to sound it should be a real nice tune.......Mark

Some of those birls will be tough to time in unison playing, even in moderate reel tempo. You have hG-birls, lA-birls, and lG-birls, some from less-than-ideal attack points. Timing all these in unison playing so that they still sound like birls won't be easy. I am surprised how often professional level competitors show weakness in making clean birls from tricky positions in uptempo playing. (Similar to the problem of the sluggish B in the crunluath off D in piobaireachd.) Obviously solo playing gives a little more leeway.

But, if you like the tune the way it is, I certainly don't advocate dumbing it down. If you've got the players, try the "hard" version. In any event, keep on composing.

Regards,
-David.

Thanks for the feed back, i thought it was a little rushed too, i just needed a second opinon. i have changed a couple things i think make it better, please tell me if it beter or worse. or should i keep it consistant.

Much improved!!!!.........Nice chune........Mark