6/8 March - Suckling Penguins - 1st writing attempt
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Tune Name: Suckling Penguins
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Tune Type: 6/8 March
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Composed By: M. Betz
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Year Composed: 2006
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- Posts: 5
- Joined: Sun Dec 10, 2006 7:03 am
- Location: Dallas, TX
6/8 March - Suckling Penguins - 1st writing attempt
This is my first attempt at writing, although I've been playing for about 30 years. Please give me your opinion and let me know if I should write some more or go back to just playing.
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- SucklingPenguins.bww
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Agree with the comments above, Mike, from clanpiper, but all is not lost. I enclose a copy of the tune with the 4th part 1st bar 2nd beat altered to suit the HG that clanpiper doesn't like, but now sounds fine I think. I have also added a dg in the appropriate places in the bars to help with timing, I feel - but only an opinion mind. There are one or two other areas where a wee tinkering would personally help witht eh melodic continuity, but essentialy the tune is fine. I have also changed the gracenote length to as more realistic speed, which lends to the swing too.
Hope the changed beat is OK.
Hope the changed beat is OK.
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- SucklingPenguinsB.bww
- Hope this helps
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If you cannot write a tune down that you can play so that they are identical, how can you truly say you know the tune!